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Ode to Tundric Gardens.. by ~ekynus:iconekynus:



this light in my eyes.. is it really so bright, or have i just been hiding under the umbrella?

i'll melodize even the dirtiest of hymns..

in the skies of capsizing floodgates, together we'll shatter mirrors and hide our fragmented reflections in locked and keyless drawers.. somehow that always makes things seem better than they really are.

with the condonement of cursing angels, in tandem we'll knit this tattered and torn yarnwork into a quilt to comfort the bloodsoaked chest we all know too well.. sometimes i think that things may seem better than they really are.

but when there's only enough nerve for one rusted soul to stand on this one empty stage, the one flickering streetlight will give its one final glow, and the ensuing darkness will be more comforting that we've yet to know..

polluted and tied to the ladder, i'll sleep..

wake me up when i ask not to be; that's the only way i'll see the sun rise.
©2004-2009 ~ekynus
:iconekynus:

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Actual title: Ode to Tundric Gardens: A Near-Success Story

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:iconacutforeverytear:
oh geez... you know my opinion on this and everything you do. so, i can just sit back and say absolutely nothing at all. :D
:iconthisdanceofmisery:
You have a beautiful mind.

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"Clothes make the man. Naked people have little or no influence on society." --Mark Twain

"I hate people. I don't need them. I had an axe I'd kill everyone...except my friends."--Jim Morrison

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:icongothiccowangel:
I love your poetry <3 +fav <3
:iconcherryflavoredpez:
very swell, as always. :)

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This Summer I Swam In A Public Place
And A Reservoir To Boot
At The Latter I Was Informal
At The Former I Wore My Suit
I Wore My Swimming Suit
:iconekynus:
Aww.. well, thanks.

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:iconekynus:
*shakes head* Thank you very much.. but I assure you, my mind is far from anything beautiful.

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:iconhellstar:
you work, already, is the first to make me speak out loud. my voice cracks as I force out "oh my god" thinking how easy this is to read for such an apparently deep meaning.

my favorite line: "i'll melodize even the dirtiest of hymns.."

i dont know why, it just gives me a shiver

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Crystal
:iconekynus:
Thanks thanks and thanks.. I'm really glad my work is doing something for you.

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